Scholarship / Commitment of celebrating diverse cultures-Annika Rodriguez Program [10]

Naveeshini...You shouldn't be telling him what to put, just advising him.

Scholarship / Commitment of celebrating diverse cultures-Annika Rodriguez Program [10]

Your essay doesn't really answer the question

Undergraduate / "I know I meet Stanford's standards": What Makes Stanford a Good Place for You? [5]

I am ending my high school career at the Tennessee Governor's Academy (TGA), a prestigious residential school with twenty-six students from all over the state.

Stanford take more students from public schools than prestigious schools. This doesn't impress. Your essay sounds a little arrogant.

Undergraduate / Dantes inferno Bball Court -- WHY STANFORD [8]

I have finally realizes what is special about Stanford; its people...Do you mean realized?
Is this the supplemental essay?

Undergraduate / "a career in music" - Berklee College of Music Undergrad essay [5]

teach myself. I taught myself...you will have to reword this