nhilun
Oct 27, 2010
Writing Feedback / Is the Internet itself bad for students? [2]
I'll be glad if someone can help me to correct this. Thanks.
First of all, I believe all of you here are quite familiar with the internet. Nowadays, the internet have became an useful assistants to all of us, it help us with a lot of things. But some people believe that internet is a bad thing for students. I totally disagree on this point.
Nowadays, some students are become addicted to the internet, they spend more and more time playing games, surfing the net. This automatically bring down their marks in school. But that's just one side of the story, have you heard the other side of it? Internet actually help student a lot in their studies. Students now don't have to sit in the library all day searching through all the book when they can simply Google it or go to Wikipedia. They got the information they need in just a few minutes. That not only help the student to study effectively but also help them save time for other things.
The internet itself doesn't have the bad effect on students. It's the person who doesn't use it the right way make the bad effect on themselves. For example, the knife, when you use it prepare food, it's a useful tool, but when you use it to kill someone, it become a dangerous thing. Internet is like the knife, you have to know how to use it the right way. So instead of blaming the internet, people now should learn how to use it right.
I'll be glad if someone can help me to correct this. Thanks.
First of all, I believe all of you here are quite familiar with the internet. Nowadays, the internet have became an useful assistants to all of us, it help us with a lot of things. But some people believe that internet is a bad thing for students. I totally disagree on this point.
Nowadays, some students are become addicted to the internet, they spend more and more time playing games, surfing the net. This automatically bring down their marks in school. But that's just one side of the story, have you heard the other side of it? Internet actually help student a lot in their studies. Students now don't have to sit in the library all day searching through all the book when they can simply Google it or go to Wikipedia. They got the information they need in just a few minutes. That not only help the student to study effectively but also help them save time for other things.
The internet itself doesn't have the bad effect on students. It's the person who doesn't use it the right way make the bad effect on themselves. For example, the knife, when you use it prepare food, it's a useful tool, but when you use it to kill someone, it become a dangerous thing. Internet is like the knife, you have to know how to use it the right way. So instead of blaming the internet, people now should learn how to use it right.
