Jamila
Nov 2, 2010
Undergraduate / Common App Essay- A creative work (film) that influenced me [3]
for the first part in red i would say something like:
Me and my mother never had an open relationship that focused on our feelings.
--i learned that sometimes simple things are always the best
The second part in red wasn't bad. Just check over a little spelling/word choice in that paragraph and it should be good.
for the first part in red i would say something like:
Me and my mother never had an open relationship that focused on our feelings.
--i learned that sometimes simple things are always the best
The second part in red wasn't bad. Just check over a little spelling/word choice in that paragraph and it should be good.
