amanda8a
Nov 8, 2010
Undergraduate / From India to the US, sharing festivals and foods - Rutgers Essay New Brunswick [4]
Hi Mounika.
I really enjoyed your essay. It paints a picture of how you felt when you arrived. It is very interesting to know your back round. There are a few spelling mistakies: I capitalized, skinny, different cultures instead of different cultural. I like the title "From India to the US" better. Good luck!
Amanda
Hi Mounika.
I really enjoyed your essay. It paints a picture of how you felt when you arrived. It is very interesting to know your back round. There are a few spelling mistakies: I capitalized, skinny, different cultures instead of different cultural. I like the title "From India to the US" better. Good luck!
Amanda