Ysuleman
Nov 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "I always take advice from my mom who knows me best" - Essay for uta help. [2]
The prompt is write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life an explain how and why this person is important to you.
So far I have this but it sucks pretty ba and I need help rewording it!
In life one will meet a lot if people and mak new friends. And many people have already passed through my short life, but the one that constant has always been mom. Many hardships and difficulties will occur l. We may turn to friends who may help us through some of our difficulties, but there has never been anyone better than my mom.
Whenever I need advice on anything I look to my mom. She knows me
better than anyone else. My mom has raiser me since birth. She support me. She listens when u news to talk and provides a huge amount of emotional support. When school becomes hard she is always there for me. She reminds Me to keep grade up for a better chance in university. If ky mom was not here then my grades would not be a good as they are. My mother is a very dependable person do me.
The prompt is write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life an explain how and why this person is important to you.
So far I have this but it sucks pretty ba and I need help rewording it!
In life one will meet a lot if people and mak new friends. And many people have already passed through my short life, but the one that constant has always been mom. Many hardships and difficulties will occur l. We may turn to friends who may help us through some of our difficulties, but there has never been anyone better than my mom.
Whenever I need advice on anything I look to my mom. She knows me
better than anyone else. My mom has raiser me since birth. She support me. She listens when u news to talk and provides a huge amount of emotional support. When school becomes hard she is always there for me. She reminds Me to keep grade up for a better chance in university. If ky mom was not here then my grades would not be a good as they are. My mother is a very dependable person do me.