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Dec 10, 2010
Undergraduate / "The president of the Ardenne High Science Club" - Extra-cuuricular activities [4]
My school places a large emphasis on test grades and homework, creating a serious mood throughout the school, and as president of the Ardenne High Science Club, I have always promoted creativity and enjoyment. The Ardenne High Science Club is an after school club that offers students the chance to do science-related activities that extend and enhance the science they experience in the classroom. The club's programmes reflect the interests of the students, the club organiser and the facilities available. It uses the opportunity to explore areas of science not covered by the curriculum and to give the club members plenty of opportunities to do practical science. I have learned through my role as president to take charge, delegate responsibilities, be creative, innovative, exciting, and take responsibility. I hope to use these attributes to contribute to many of the clubs and activities of this institution.
Instead of talking in generic terms about the activities of the club, you would be better off if you talk about specific topics, like activities that the club arranged, any awards that it won.
Focus on your role as a leader and try to include one or two specific examples.
Change "serious mode" to sth else... it looks kinda odd.
My school places a large emphasis on test grades and homework, creating a serious mood throughout the school, and as president of the Ardenne High Science Club, I have always promoted creativity and enjoyment. The Ardenne High Science Club is an after school club that offers students the chance to do science-related activities that extend and enhance the science they experience in the classroom. The club's programmes reflect the interests of the students, the club organiser and the facilities available. It uses the opportunity to explore areas of science not covered by the curriculum and to give the club members plenty of opportunities to do practical science. I have learned through my role as president to take charge, delegate responsibilities, be creative, innovative, exciting, and take responsibility. I hope to use these attributes to contribute to many of the clubs and activities of this institution.
Instead of talking in generic terms about the activities of the club, you would be better off if you talk about specific topics, like activities that the club arranged, any awards that it won.
Focus on your role as a leader and try to include one or two specific examples.
Change "serious mode" to sth else... it looks kinda odd.
