Writing Feedback / Living in a big city has various advantages for people [4]

Hi everyone this is my essay that I have to write for my english writing skill class.
Thank you very much for your help

Living in a big city has various advantages for people of every generation.
An advantage for teenagers who live in a larger city is for instance that they
have several possibilities to entertain themselves or with their friends during the
week.
For example if a teenager lives in a populated city and wants to go out at night,
the next bar or club are mostly not more than 30 minutes away.
Another advantage is that teenagers don't need to drive to another city to meet their
friends, like a lot young adults need to if they come from the countryside. Because
of the fact that teenagers normally live close by the school they go to, their friends from
school normally live not far away from one's own home.
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