Undergraduate / "Football has been a test of skill" - Elaboration of an Extra Curricular Activity [3]

looks pretty good to me. just a few things here and there.

"The last three of which I have spent on a well formed varsity team,"
u should hyphenate "well-formed"

"there were no sore losers, or excessive unsportsmanship of any caliber."
unsportsmanship i dont think is really a word. i would say "poor sportsmanship" or "unsportsman like conduct" idk if unsportsman like is right either actually.

"Football has always been a exuberant activity to me, and will always be even when I'm not there to enjoy it."
it has to be "an exuberant"

other than that i liked ur paper, n those r probly just typo's n e way haha good luck with your essay!