Undergraduate / "while reading biography of Supachai Chearavanont" - essay about choosing university. [4]

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Short Essay: In five or six sentences, tell us how you first became interested in BU and what steps you have taken to learn more about us...

I first heard BU since I was in grade ninth while reading biography of Supachai Chearavanont in a magazine; a successful business man; a president and founder of the biggest telecom company in Thailand; True corperation. Later until I was in grade eleventh I visited BU's website and I choose BU to be my dream school without doubtful. Choosing university is a big step in my life. It is not just an academic decision but personal which I believe BU will able to help me succeed this goal.

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