Undergraduate / "the idea of being famous scientist" - academic interests and/or professional goals [4]

But for others, for example to me, they are words

of being a famous scientist.

My scientific career has begunbeganat thein seventh grade

I was excited by the interesting phenomena of this science.

These unique facts started me to gethelped me to become strongly interested in chemistry.

I have attended and succeeded in a lot of chemical Olympiads which were holdheld among Kazakhstan students who were engaged in chemistry as much as I amwas .

However, the factor which affected exactlyinfluenced me the most to choose my objective career was in the biology science club, whenwhere I have beenwas absorbed in chemical processes in different biomolecules.

My teacher who has seennoticed my curiosity

I will study biochemistry with the great desirepassion

not only it isis it a chemistry of living organisms

taken with biglots of diligence to my native country

I cannot imagine a more exciting or fulfilling goal.

Great essay, needs some grammatical fix-ups.

Undergraduate / Discovery a math secret [4]

FIRST PARAGRAPH

This dayToday was devoted for X5.

I had learned about one of the most beauty of the Creator that there are only five regular polyhedrons. I'm not sure how to change this, but I understand. However, it definitely needs to be changed.

which I had called from X1 to X5named X1-X5

their scientific names made me , onlyto a 6th grade student, no sense.

I attachedmemyself on the chair

throughout an hour to draw, cut and stick the equilateral triangles together for a whole hour.

Finally, the "masterpiece" is donewas finished

The reason iswas obvious: there areweresotoo many joints.

the next musthad to be exquisite.

I lifted it up and admiringly watch itstared at it with admiration , then slightly pressed it slightly .

I musthad to find a new way to make X5 more firmly .

It's a great essay, just needs grammar fix-ups.