nishan
Dec 27, 2010
Undergraduate / Rice Supplements - my love for chemistry and why Rice [4]
Zachary...
that interest further to where now I want to major in it- resulting in me wanting to do a major in Chemistry... your sentence is a bit too ambiguous with the it.
3rd sentence---- undergo changes and reacting to form new compounds
I think you can omit the "Particularly one lab..." sentence or you can expand it...
and its not Soaponification... its saponfication... typos can make you go down a lot...
daily compound do you mean household commodity (sounds better than daily)
If possible expand more on the lab procedure that you did... might help... and get those facts straight
Check your spellings before submission (thrity)..
Change the word thrive in the second sentence... only micro-organisms thrive (unsuitable verb)!
and i guess you can word it as such... I feel like I would thrive in smaller classes as opposed to class held in large lecture rooms because those smaller classes allow me to learn on a more personal basis
You might need to rechange the order a little bit.. since I see the "Finally...the main..." somewhere in the middle of the paragraph...
im not sure if this helps a lot...
Zachary...
that interest further to where now I want to major in it- resulting in me wanting to do a major in Chemistry... your sentence is a bit too ambiguous with the it.
3rd sentence---- undergo changes and reacting to form new compounds
I think you can omit the "Particularly one lab..." sentence or you can expand it...
and its not Soaponification... its saponfication... typos can make you go down a lot...
daily compound do you mean household commodity (sounds better than daily)
If possible expand more on the lab procedure that you did... might help... and get those facts straight
Check your spellings before submission (thrity)..
Change the word thrive in the second sentence... only micro-organisms thrive (unsuitable verb)!
and i guess you can word it as such... I feel like I would thrive in smaller classes as opposed to class held in large lecture rooms because those smaller classes allow me to learn on a more personal basis
You might need to rechange the order a little bit.. since I see the "Finally...the main..." somewhere in the middle of the paragraph...
im not sure if this helps a lot...