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Sep 14, 2008
Writing Feedback / I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player [2]
hows the essay, I need more to talk about:
The two most important things to me are being a baseball player and being a guitar player. In between schoolwork, working on my swing, and working out, I play guitar. Everything I do revolves around baseball. After that, I make music just for fun. I play in a band. We pretty much just practice and play whatever we want. I'm the young one. They call me "Gadget," because of all of the "Gizmo's and Gadgets" I bought with my own money this summer. I have bought everything from a new amp, new acoustic, and 9 new harmonicas to a Talk Box (not to mention a lot of accessories). I play along with the nickname. I'm writing a song called "Gizmo's and Gadget's." I also play harmonica. I have other obsessions as well. Guitar is second in my life. Number one is baseball. Well, most people call it obsessions. I don't. I believe that if I'm not the best, then I'm a failure - "if your not first then your last." People may say that my dreams are impossible. In fact, I hear that a lot, but as my PE coach once told, "think big or you will be small." I try to live by this. If I don't try to be the best, then I never will be the best. I focus on the future and not on the now.
I need about 1 1/2 more pages
hows the essay, I need more to talk about:
The two most important things to me are being a baseball player and being a guitar player. In between schoolwork, working on my swing, and working out, I play guitar. Everything I do revolves around baseball. After that, I make music just for fun. I play in a band. We pretty much just practice and play whatever we want. I'm the young one. They call me "Gadget," because of all of the "Gizmo's and Gadgets" I bought with my own money this summer. I have bought everything from a new amp, new acoustic, and 9 new harmonicas to a Talk Box (not to mention a lot of accessories). I play along with the nickname. I'm writing a song called "Gizmo's and Gadget's." I also play harmonica. I have other obsessions as well. Guitar is second in my life. Number one is baseball. Well, most people call it obsessions. I don't. I believe that if I'm not the best, then I'm a failure - "if your not first then your last." People may say that my dreams are impossible. In fact, I hear that a lot, but as my PE coach once told, "think big or you will be small." I try to live by this. If I don't try to be the best, then I never will be the best. I focus on the future and not on the now.
I need about 1 1/2 more pages
