Writing Feedback / my dad teaches me and has a big influence on me [5]

Hello everyone please give me feedback about the following simple paragraph that i wrote it on one who has made an impact on my life. I'm ready to hear your comment . thanks

My dad has a big influence on me. He always teaches me how to be a successful in my life. Therefore , he kept his eye on me when I was a student while studying .He usually sat next to me and asked about the tough points that could face me . He gave me instructions in my study and tried to be beside me .He encouraged me to be something in the future. Therefore, he was ready to pay anything that could help me in my study. For example. I still remember one day when my dad brought me a laptop because I asked him for it when I had a research for the history teacher. I think I owned him most of my success in my career to my father.