Graduate / "dynamic approach to architectural studies" SOP - the reason for choosing our school? [4]

XXX is the best school for me to continue on my journey to becoming an architect who is conscious of design's impact on people, culture, and society. I have seen how the school encourages students to think beyond the tangibility of architecture to the intangible, philosophical, and theoretical form that defines the role of architects in our society. Also, I admire XXX's dynamic approach to architectural studies through experiments, research, and constructions which explore the endless possibilities of architecture.

Please let me know if the above paragraph sounds appropriate and specific. Also, is it ok to say 'admire'...or does that sound too much?

Thank you,
heeyun