Writing Feedback / "Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow? [4]

Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs

In a family, one of the more important functions when talking about youth and their family is the assurance that the youth is satisfactorily socialized into the norms and values of society. The bond between parent and child is formed in the first five or six years of their life. Without sufficient care to complete this function, the youth is at a high risk of forming this bond with someone else. Children pay more attention to what an adult does than to what he or she does. When parents who are already apart of a street gang or who are engaging themselves in criminal activity, they send a message of acceptance of the actions they make to their own child. But what can society contribute to families across Canada? The answer targets the parents. A broader array of programs on parenting skills should be offered to all Canadian parents so that they are trained and supported to take care of their children. Enforcing structure and rules upon their children help them distinguish what is right and wrong. If these actions are taken in the family, this could help solve this teen gang problem.

For many Canadian youth, the sight of gangs within the school's walls and on the school's fields is common. Challenged adolescents take their issues to the school ground and relate them with others, thus forming gangs through their own anger. Schools are meant to educate children so that they have a future full of many opportunities. It is their chance to explore what interests them and what doesn't, but with the on going and increasing amount of violence, drug use and other gang related activity inside the school, Canadian adolescents are wasting their talents and futures away. In 1995, a grade 8 student named John was the first student to be expelled 'for life' in Ontario because he tried to slash a classmate with a knife (Duffy, 1995, p. 117). It is said that one of riskiest times for a teenager for being involved in gang related activities is between the end of school and when the parents return home from work. Research shows that during 3:00 and 7:00 p.m. is the riskiest times for substance abuse, theft and other juvenile delinquency (Chettleburgh, 2007, p. 212). Schools need to provide solid after school programs to keep teenagers busy and active during these times. If they can gain interests in their youth, then it will encourage them to stay off the streets and do something that will benefit them and others.

In every community and in every society across Canada, there are thousands of unique opportunities for youth to take. Opportunities to help expand their own futures, contribute to their society and to provide a personal income. But instead, youth are turning to gangs because of the profits that are made illegally by selling weapons, illegal substances like drugs and alcohol, and even their own bodies. Since street gangs across the country are dynamically engaging in street level sales of crack and powdered cocaine, there is an on going motivator for gang members to stay within their groups much later in their life (Chettleburgh, 2007, p. 115). Thus the battle over Canadian streets is becoming increasingly more difficult because of these great profits members make. To solve this issue, the powerful business communities must create more meaningful economic opportunities for both at-risk and gang involved adolescents. This provides programs to teach youth high demand skills such as building trades, so that they build their own futures and make a profit. By targeting these two groups of adolescents, it helps reduce current gang members off the streets and also prevents youth from joining a gang.

Unquestionably youth gangs are a major problem in Canada. The assorted institutions in each community must all perform their own functions that are required to maintain the society. If this doesn't happen, youth gangs will continue to roam the streets of Canada. By addressing the issues of youth gangs with children who are trying to find their way, possibly Canada can control our juvenile problems and reduce these gangs. Street gangs and their members are here to stay. They will remain an ever present feature of Canadian life despite the best efforts of police to suppress them, of courts to punish them and of communities to prevent them. Perhaps it is simply part of the human nature to make the same mistakes over and over again, despite the aching lessons learned by our ancestors. Nevertheless actions can be taken within these institutions and as a result the problem will be reduced.

Writing Feedback / COLLECTIVE STORY about my Family; Father's & Mother's Side [NEW]

This is my narrative about my family that tells the collective story of them. If someone could edit any grammatical mistakes, etc. that would be appreciated. Thanks.

Father's Side

One of the earliest known birth dates in my family comes from my father's side of the family. My grandpa, King Lee, would have been 123 years old as of this year! Born in China, he met my grandma through an arrangement by parents. They married and they eventually moved here to Canada, to escape the war between China and Japan, and to start a new life. They were married, and soon later came three sons. Unfortunately, King Lee died when my father was only 5 years old. The eldest son, George Lee, married his ex wife and moved to Toronto where they adopted their adopted son Mathew. He was adopted from China. The middle child, Bill Lee married early in his life to his current wife Joanie Lee. Together they had their first son, Brandon and later adopted their daughter from Romania, and named her Gabriela. Lastly is my father, the youngest of his three brothers. He met Tracey in college and married soon after. They had me and my brother, Braedan. Kit Lee lived to be 92, and passed away in 2006.

A lot of history is hidden within my father's side of the family because if of the language barrier from English to Chinese. But what is very interesting is the story of how my grandpa and grandma came to Canada. Back then, my grandpa had to pay a head tax of $500. In 2005 my grandma met with the Stephen Harper when Harper publically announced the apology for the Chinese Head Tax. A lot of the details are gone because no one is left to tell the stories. All that is left are documents in Chinese.

Mother's Side

Both my nana and papa (Maureen & Tom) were born and raised in England. They married at an early age and moved to Canada where they had two daughters, Karen and Tracey. They split later on and Tom remarried his current wife Inga. Inga already had three children from previous marriages. Monica, her youngest and only daughter, is married to Michael Buzanis and together they had triplets. Their names are Jeremy, Nolan and Emily. Inga also had two sons, David and Tony long. Tony married Victoria and they had two daughters together. Their names are Kierstein and Chelsea Long, and they both go to South. Lastly is David Long, who recently married his wife Tracy. Tracy and David have been trying to have children, and now they have found out that they will be having twins. Every Christmas we all get together at my papa's house and have a nice big dinner. We are fortunate to be so close to Inga's side of the family. Unfortunately David and Tracy live in Texas, so we rarely see them.

My aunt Karen had her son, Shawn, when she was 16 years old. Unmarried at the time and still in school, she was forced to stay at home with the baby. Of course my nana helped out a lot. Karen hasn't been in contact with Shawn's father. Later on, Karen met a man named John Scott, and they eventually married. John adopted Shawn and had a daughter with Karen, whom they named Trisha. Trisha is now engaged with David Robbins and will be getting married next year in Cuba. John and Karen divorced years later and Karen met another man named Rick Warner through her work. They married in 2003, and I "sang" with Jack DiCarlo at Michael's on the Thames for them.

As one can see, my mother's side is larger, but it doesn't mean that it is more interesting. Both are equally fascinating in their own way. If it's the bonds we share with new members of the family or if its the history from my father's side, I find my family very interesting.