Undergraduate / "go into medical school and to become a doctor " - essay for University of Hartford? [3]

Applying for University of Hartford.
Considering your strengths, talents, and interests,why do you wish to attend
the University of Hartford?

In the beginning of high school I wasn't always sure what the future would be.Throughout high school, I decided to interact with others. This helped me discover what I want out of life. Joining clubs and doing community service showed me that you can make a difference.

My interest grew in mostly science. I love to learn new things whether it be, biology or chemistry. Going to University of Hartford will help me further my knowledge and understanding of biology. I strongly believe that University of Hartford will help me expand on my intended major that grew from just a interest to what I would like to make a career out of. Hoping to take in higher knowledge of biology from University of Hartford science program: I plan to take these ideas from what I learn into getting a career in the medical field.

My goal is to go into medical school and to become a doctor because I want to help others that can't help themselves. I believe that University of Hartford will prepare me for the journey that lies ahead.

This is a rough draft. Please I would like feedback that would be greatly appreciated.