Undergraduate / I know how to calculate complex equations mentally without lots of writing or no writing at all [6]

The university of Toronto asked for a maximum of 3000 characters for the engineering application essay, and this is what I have come up with, I would really appreciate it if you helped me because you have no idea how much this means to me. Plus I can't think of any good ending for it.

This is what they wrote:
What has inspired you to pursue an engineering degree and why would you like to study at the University of Toronto?
What skills have you developed through your extra-curricular experiences that will support your future success as both a student and an engineer?
And this is where I come in.

First of all, I would like to thank you for reading and evaluating my application to the University of Toronto. I humbly submit this essay as per your priority requirement. I believe that without proper education, I will not be able to achieve my dreams; therefore I want to be able to sustain myself and become more independent.

This opportunity means the world to me and I am willing to do my best. I am an ambitious and responsible high school student who wants to succeed in all aspects of life. I'm dreaming of owning a manufacture company and lead it to success, while being a role model for others to look up to. I want to be able to make wise decisions in my workplace, in spending money as well as managing my own life. With guidance of your university's professors and educational staff, I will be introduced to the higher level of education that will help me succeed in the world of engineering.

Ever since I was a child, I was fascinated with the worlds of mathematics and science and their applications in the real world. My father, a mechanical engineer, was one of the people who inspired me to continue in the two fields while taking me along with him in order to experience the world of engineering first hand. With that in hand, I dedicated my senior years into studying the sciences and mathematics with a future goal of applying to engineering at the University Of Toronto specifically. Considering that UofT is one of the best universities in Canada, my long life dream was just to visit Canada, and has evolved as I grew up into studying there. I've been to places here and there but from what I've heard, Toronto and the University of Toronto are the greatest.

What I see in myself is that I know how to calculate complex equations (not that complex) mentally without lots of writing or no writing at all. Good body coordination is very helpful once you realize how to make good use of it, now I'm a basketball player in my school's team. Although the team is not that good, I'm the one who is keeping it together as one.