Brwned
Feb 19, 2011
Book Reports / King Lear Paragraph - Forming a good topic sentence? [4]
Lear's riotous entourage of a hundred knights clearly disrupted the sanctity of Goneril's castle thus her decision to dismiss half of Lear train was, to an extent, well-justified.
Haha, I guess that does work as a topic sentence although I did create a longer and more detailed one.
Lear, being a tragically superficial and self-indulgent ruler, unmistakably does not see his own folly when Goneril criticizes him and his entourage for disrupting the sanctity of her castle, despite it being a well-justified claim.
Which one is stronger?
Lear's riotous entourage of a hundred knights clearly disrupted the sanctity of Goneril's castle thus her decision to dismiss half of Lear train was, to an extent, well-justified.
Haha, I guess that does work as a topic sentence although I did create a longer and more detailed one.
Lear, being a tragically superficial and self-indulgent ruler, unmistakably does not see his own folly when Goneril criticizes him and his entourage for disrupting the sanctity of her castle, despite it being a well-justified claim.
Which one is stronger?
