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amythurston   
Feb 26, 2011
Undergraduate / "The accelerated five year BS MSN nursing program" - transfer essay [3]

/third sentence, take out well. 7th sentence, change I knew to I know I want to be a ...8th sentence, put a comma after nursing, obtain licenssure as a registered nurse, and then work for two more years before I can enter the Nurse Practitioner program. This way you fix the run on sentence.
amythurston   
Feb 26, 2011
Undergraduate / A degree from the School of Engineering at Virginia Polytechnic and State University [6]

In the future I aim to pursue a degree from the School of Engineering at Virginia Polytechnic and State University. Virginia Tech is the best fit for me. Located in my home state and ranked 13th in the nation, I'm confident VT will provide me with the best education, life skills, and experiences needed in order to have a successful career. While not certain on any specific engineering profession at this stage of my life, without a doubt I know I want to make a difference! My strength's have always been in math and science. I thrive in collaborative environments with hands on working and experimentation. The field of engineering is in high demand for our country; STEM programs (science, technology, engineering, and mathematics) have continued to rise over the past decade. Now more than ever I feel that my innovation and creativity as a young woman will make a difference. I want to support the United States in becoming more internationally competitive in engineering, anything from new types of infrastructure to personal devices that will improve the quality of life for people world-wide. More importantly, my goal is that my efforts are beneficial to the environment as well as personally rewarding.

As a first generation college student in my family, this scholarship will give me the financial support necessary to pursue my education. My parents have instilled in me many great qualities, two of which are to go after what you want and give it your all. Throughout my four years of High School I have made the most of every opportunity; taken the most rigorous courses offered while being very involved in sports and organizations. I am a well-rounded individual with a passion for science and technology. Receiving this scholarship will allow me the privilege to continue to serve as a leader in my community and jumpstart my college education at Virginia Polytechnic and State University.
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