little sun
Mar 20, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Parents are first" - narrative essay [12]
asmafiqi
When I was a child I had many dreams
That had many meaning to my life
I had no one to help me accomplish all those dreams
But I had confidence in me that kept me going
I had no money and no courage to finish them
But I had God on my side that had showed which way to turn => i had god that had showed which way to turn in mu side.
I had determination and motivation that have got me this far
I had no regrets and no pain what so ever
=> you said you had confidence but then no courage?????
asmafiqi
When I was a child I had many dreams
That had many meaning to my life
I had no one to help me accomplish all those dreams
But I had confidence in me that kept me going
I had no money and no courage to finish them
But I had God on my side that had showed which way to turn => i had god that had showed which way to turn in mu side.
I had determination and motivation that have got me this far
I had no regrets and no pain what so ever
=> you said you had confidence but then no courage?????