Graduate / the idea of playing individual sports and team one (master degree admission) [10]

There are some grammatical errors in you r essay,however the argument is alright.e.g "nowaday's people rise to play sports"

Grammar, Usage / "i'd like to reconnaissance the area?" - does this sentence make sense? [5]

Dear JOMSE
Thank you very much for your help;much appreciated!P.S What are you studying?