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Mar 26, 2011
Writing Feedback / Need help in writing a better eassy on how to solve gang violence in school [4]
can you take a look at my eassy and tell me if i'm doing something wrong or if there a lot of missing point in my eassy.
How to Solve the Problem of Gang Violence in School
Violence has increased in our schools, within the past four years; there are thirty or more teachers and students being killed. Many of these problems that cause violence, such as drugs, gangs, guns, and television programs are all problems linked to violence. Students of single parents are more compelled to join gangs because no male figure is in the home, feeling of abandonment, and being intimidated in school by other students. With gang violence growing, in the last few years schools are now looking for solutions to solve gang violence. Many schools are trying to solve the problem in their school by having gang prevention programs, adding more police officers, having hall monitors, and educating parents on how to be aware of sign or symbols if they suspect their child might be in a gang.
One way schools are trying to stop gang violence is having gang prevention program, at school to teach students that joining gangs is not the solution to their problems.
Having more police in schools has minimized gangs active in school, and keeping them from entering school. And by having hall monitors helps prevents students from hanging in halls and bathrooms while schools are in session.
Parents are being educated by police and the gang prevention program to be aware of their child or children being in a gang. Parents are taught to spot signs, symbols, and the clothes they wear, as well as colors. Stopping gang violence in school will prevent students and teachers from being killed.
School that have police doesn't have to be extreme to get there point across. But; have security camera can be a start.
can you take a look at my eassy and tell me if i'm doing something wrong or if there a lot of missing point in my eassy.
How to Solve the Problem of Gang Violence in School
Violence has increased in our schools, within the past four years; there are thirty or more teachers and students being killed. Many of these problems that cause violence, such as drugs, gangs, guns, and television programs are all problems linked to violence. Students of single parents are more compelled to join gangs because no male figure is in the home, feeling of abandonment, and being intimidated in school by other students. With gang violence growing, in the last few years schools are now looking for solutions to solve gang violence. Many schools are trying to solve the problem in their school by having gang prevention programs, adding more police officers, having hall monitors, and educating parents on how to be aware of sign or symbols if they suspect their child might be in a gang.
One way schools are trying to stop gang violence is having gang prevention program, at school to teach students that joining gangs is not the solution to their problems.
Having more police in schools has minimized gangs active in school, and keeping them from entering school. And by having hall monitors helps prevents students from hanging in halls and bathrooms while schools are in session.
Parents are being educated by police and the gang prevention program to be aware of their child or children being in a gang. Parents are taught to spot signs, symbols, and the clothes they wear, as well as colors. Stopping gang violence in school will prevent students and teachers from being killed.
School that have police doesn't have to be extreme to get there point across. But; have security camera can be a start.
