Macys
Apr 5, 2011
Undergraduate / Essay for FAMU admissions (activity, interest, experience, or achievement) - start? [2]
I just need help starting my essay for FAMU. This is the topic:
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, a movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful for you.
The essay should be no longer then 250 words.
so far this is what i have.
An experience in my life that was significantly meaning to me was the passing of my two sisters in a tragic car accident on their way up to Tallahassee. Michelle attended and graduated FAMU in the winter of 2003 and began teaching at Tallahassee's School of Arts and Science. Marsha was a student at TCC, planning on transferring to FAMU the following semester.
Any Pointers on where to go after this or even on how i can improve what i have will be very helpful.
Thanks in advance.
I just need help starting my essay for FAMU. This is the topic:
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, a movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful for you.
The essay should be no longer then 250 words.
so far this is what i have.
An experience in my life that was significantly meaning to me was the passing of my two sisters in a tragic car accident on their way up to Tallahassee. Michelle attended and graduated FAMU in the winter of 2003 and began teaching at Tallahassee's School of Arts and Science. Marsha was a student at TCC, planning on transferring to FAMU the following semester.
Any Pointers on where to go after this or even on how i can improve what i have will be very helpful.
Thanks in advance.
