Writing Feedback / (IELTS) old building preserve or demolish? [5]

Katie,

Good vocab, and language is also persuasive and strong. I agree with Hafsa about essay.

Look forward for more writing samples and feedbacks.

Writing Feedback / corrections in my essay "aspects of teenage life" [18]

Nice work Hafsa,

and really good feedback Scientiana and Jessica.

Look forward to see more suggestions and writings.