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Apr 14, 2011
Scholarship / "A student who is literate and educated: biotechnology" - why I deserve scholarship? [4]

"scholarships" lose the "because" not a good way to start any sentence "Every student wishes to get a free education." Cut down your sentences, they're too wordy READ THIS OUTLOUD TO YOURSELF!!! See how it sounds your tenses are off. Just minor errors. Good Luck to you and your endeavors. Try a Writing center in a local university they can be of more assistance too.
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