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Oct 8, 2008
Grammar, Usage / Sentence Problem - it's a fragment, how to reword it? [9]

Fragment sentence<<<need correct

Hi ,

I have Some fragment sentence..Can you help me to correct them!!

1- The desire of all humankind to live in peace and freedom, For example.
2-Altough people want to believe that all men are created equal.

I need an independent clause to correct this fragment.
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