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Apr 25, 2011
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Change is always good. Discuss.
I'm writing an essay on this and i'm kinda stuck.
What i have so far is my intro:
Change is a deviation, a transformation from the original state. As it was said by Heraclitus, "Nothing is constant except change." It is ever present and inherent in our world. That much is certain. However, what remains to be seen is if change is always good. Proponents for change argue that change is necessary. It is essential in order to remain relevant and to survive in today's competitive world. "He who rejects change is the architect of decay," said Harold Wilson. However, people are generally inclined to reject change. There exists in us a primordial fear of the unknown, which is brought about by change. As such, humans are quick to reject change and condemn it, labeling those that work for them as good change and those that do not as bad change. However, change is always good so long as it affects society as a whole, positively and allows for progress and development.
I don't know how to continue.
I was thinking of bring up the point on how change, either an improvement on the current or a complete overhaul, is good so long as it adheres to the original aim/intention/purpose. Also, i considered how change in order to correct an injustice is also always a good change.
totally lost and out of ideas (more of my ideas are all over the place and i can't organize them at all)
Change is always good. Discuss.
I'm writing an essay on this and i'm kinda stuck.
What i have so far is my intro:
Change is a deviation, a transformation from the original state. As it was said by Heraclitus, "Nothing is constant except change." It is ever present and inherent in our world. That much is certain. However, what remains to be seen is if change is always good. Proponents for change argue that change is necessary. It is essential in order to remain relevant and to survive in today's competitive world. "He who rejects change is the architect of decay," said Harold Wilson. However, people are generally inclined to reject change. There exists in us a primordial fear of the unknown, which is brought about by change. As such, humans are quick to reject change and condemn it, labeling those that work for them as good change and those that do not as bad change. However, change is always good so long as it affects society as a whole, positively and allows for progress and development.
I don't know how to continue.
I was thinking of bring up the point on how change, either an improvement on the current or a complete overhaul, is good so long as it adheres to the original aim/intention/purpose. Also, i considered how change in order to correct an injustice is also always a good change.
totally lost and out of ideas (more of my ideas are all over the place and i can't organize them at all)
