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Apr 29, 2011
Writing Feedback / The TOEFL ibt: People who have different interests and personalities cannot be friend [5]

The following is my first composition here. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Many people will consider that if he or she wants to make friends, his or her new friend should have the same interests with him or her. This is because they have the same topic to discuss with each other. But if the new friend does not have the same interest with him or her, he or she also can make friends with him or her. There are some reasons.

First of all, if someone who does not have the same interest with him or her, this person can share different experiences with him or her. For example, someone likes to go to bookstores to buy books, but he or she just likes to go to library to borrow books. This is because buying books are more expensive than borrowing books. However, he or she can introduce benefits of borrowing books for his or her new friend. They maybe go to the library together in the future.

Second, many people usually say if someone wants to marry another person, his or her personality should be different. For example, if a husband does not like to talk with other people, he need to find a wife who is talkative. This is because one can listen to another person carefully and another person can say smoothly.

Last but not least, new friend who does not have the same interest with him or her, the new friend can share his or her experiences with him or her. For instance, the new friend can tell what interesting things occur when he or she went mountain climbing or went to go travel around the world. Although he or she does not like to do these activities, he or she also considers that his or her new friend is so interesting.

In conslusion, someone who does not have the same interests and personality with him or her, they also will be friends in one day. After all, not everyone has the same interests or personality with another person in the world. Everythings will be changed every muinute.
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