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May 17, 2011
Undergraduate / Passion of Fashion - I need an essay to be accepted at the Illinois Institute of ART [6]

( i wrote exactly what is in my mind , what do you think??please feel free to correct my sentences and to give me more ideas )

My name is Fatoumata Diallo. I am 16 years old. I am a senior at Sullivan HS. I will graduete in Next January. I am so excited to finish because i am thinking about my next step. My next step will be me all about my passion. I live for my passion. To be a fashion designer is my goal.

Since i was young ,by the age of 6years old i used to sew my barbie s clothing. I can draw more than 10 difference dresses in less than 7 minutes. I have a big book where i saved my drawings since 2005.I am very expired by designing cloths. Last spring , i took one month sewing class with a woman who volunteered to help teenagers . she was so surprised and proud of me by the was i saw for the first time in a electronic sewing machine. I won two books with her " THE BOOK OF HOME SEWING" and " THE SINGER CREATIVE SEWING IDEAS".I am pretty good because i am very determined , but i think that i need more help to be EXTRA good and to be the future of the next generation, thats the reason why i chose THE ILLINOIS INSTITUTE OF ART because the jobs that The Illinois Institute Of Art have done and the help that the school has provided for the students. I really want to be part of it .I am doing my service learning hours at the " I AM YOU " right now, i volunteered in sewing , realizing my own drawing.

At the Illinois Institute of Art i expect to accomplish my dream, To finish my bachelor, to come out with my own line clothing that i already named *BS-FASHION*.To see happiness in people s eyes by making them feel fabulous, gorgeous,wonderful by the clothes that i made .Please give a chance to show you who i am .
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