Writing Feedback / Distance learning and online computer classes - rate my essay. [2]

Agree or disagree That distance learning and online computer classes should replace class room learning.

Where ever we turn our gaze we will see the chnges.changing is the nature of the world. Man through the ages undergoes to the changes. Some time these changes are worse but most of the time it will helpfull.We can see the changes in our education system also. If we look in the past the only way we found to get education was to go to college or school. But in now days as the new technologies are interning in the world these technologies make the world computerized and electronic. This advancement affects our education system also. The invention of the computer and internet made the education system more advance and mordoinizeed.

In our country we can see two types of education first one is direct learning and other one is indirect learning. In direct learning student goes to school and college and interact with the teachers face to face. It is true that face to face interaction leaves a deep impact on teachers and student both. In class room learning student not only meet with the teachers but also come in touch with the verity of student which is also helpful in getting knowledge. Through this way student can share there views and adopt the others students view.

On the other hand indirect learning that is distance learning and online classes are the morden way of getting education. Some times what happen that some people are not able to go to college and attained the classes because of some circumstance chances in these situation distance learning and online classed help them to complete their education and fulfill their dream of better carrier. for example here I want to illustrate the story one of my friend he was very intelligent and has a good academic status but in the middle of the graduation his father died and he was next earning member of his family after his father in this situation it was not possible for him to go to college and complete their education in this situation with the help of the online classes he was to complete his graduation with his job. Some times people want to get high education but it is not possible for ever human being to go to another country and complete his wish but through the indirect education facility student can easily get education from other countries also. Some people feel hesitations to go to college because of their age at this situation they can complete his qualification through online classes.

In my opinion both the way of education have their own place and importance. One can not replace another.Distance learning and online classes should supplement the real class room learning, can not replace it .It could be effective solution to get every one educated.

Writing Feedback / Essay: marry someone familiar or different? [3]

It is better to marry some one who is similar to you rather than some one who is different from you.

Marriage is a relationship depends upon the trust, faith and love. In my country India marriage is divided in to two parts one is arrange marriage and another one is love marriage. In arrange marriage generally parents choose the groom and bride of the same cast and religion. And in love marriage couple chooses to each other.

In marriage couple should not only live together but they should understand to each other, they should respect the feeling of each other. And the sacrifices should be from the both side.

If we look in past in our country marriage was totally decided by the parents. Two people who never meet tide in a knot for the whole life and they spend their life to make themselves according to each other. We can see so many example of arrange marriage around us for example our parents, grand parents. But in now days as every thing is changing therefore the concept of the marriage is also changed. Now the marriage is not only a social boundation or the permeation of the society to fulfill physical requirement but it's a commitment between two people of the different sex for the life long.

In my opinion for a successful marriage it is very important that both the person should not only know and love each other but they should respects each others feelings understand each other very well .It is not important that both of them belongs to same profession and have same interest or hobbies. The most important thing is that both of them are honest and faith full to each other.

It is true that marry with a similar person is better than marry with a different person .For example if two person have same interest and nature they will face less difficulties to communicate each other, to understand each others feelings and thoughts they can spend much time with each other make better plan for life.

In conclusion I would like to say that not only marriage but every relationship can go everlasting if it have Faith, Trust, Loyalty, Transparency, and emotions for each-other.

Writing Feedback / We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion. [NEW]

It is possible to know something about a person by the way of he or she dressess. - TOEFL Essay

Not only in our country but in the whole world every state, every country has their own tradition, culture, language, religion and unique dress style. Therefore it is possible to know about a person from their language to which religion, country and state they belongs. Same as it is possible to know something about a person by the way of their dress . For example in young age boys and girls generally likes to wear attractive and colorful dress and an elderly or a mature person likes to dress in soft color that is not very attractive. If we see an old person in colorful dress weform an opinion that this person has a romantic and exciting nature. There is an old belief that a persons living style and dressing sense gives a gimps of there culture, religion and profession.

In our country many profession has there own uniform like advocacy, doctors and the army etc. For example if we see a man in police uniform the personality of that person strikes in our mind that this person should be brave and served for the safety of the society. No matter weather we know them or not.

Not only in profession but in generally we form an opinion abut the person according to his or her dress. As if we see a girl in a broad neck top, short skirt we make opinion that this girl is very modern, bold and frank etc.

In my opinion it is true that we can form an opinion about a person according to there dress but it is not necessarely always true. As the world is changing fast the requirement of the people is changing. It is not necessary that if we see a in a particular dress like in a lawyers dress a army dress the characteristics of that dress belongs to that person. It is possible that a person can adopt a nature according to the requirement of there job but in personal life that person must be shy, simple.

In the conclusion I want to say that we can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.It must be wrong some time.