Undergraduate / "Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!" [9]

Now my son is seven months old and he is my inspiration and motivation to everything I do. Thanks to him not only am I a young woman who aspires prosperity and success in life but one that has many qualities; I am responsible, determined, hardworking, academically oriented, organized, bright, talented, a natural leader and overall confident about my future.

I believe that with my son's inspiration, my qualities and my will to help others, I can contribute to the UF's campus community as much as it needs me too, especially in the academic aspect.

I thank you in advanced for giving me the opportunity to be a possible future student at The University of Florida.

Undergraduate / "Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!" [9]

I really would like to post my new conclusion. do you think you can give me your opinion about it?? please that would be wonderful

Undergraduate / "Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!" [9]

thank you so much you have been great!!!

Undergraduate / "Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!" [9]

thank you very much... you've been really helpful... i have alot of grammar mistakes english is not my first language i really appreciate your help...

and the prompt is:

Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your family, your school or community activities, or your involvement in areas outside of school.

please tell me if my essay is good in relation to the prompt

thank you so much