Writing Feedback / A beautiful girl at night time [9]

On a summer holiday, Jim and his friends took a trip to Preah Sihanouk province. They all had such a nice day there, and until mid-night they had so much fun on the beach. While enjoying with other friends, John saw a beautiful girl walked across there. That girl looks really gorgeous with long, black hair and slim body which impressed John indeed. At first sight, he fell for her, tried to chase and flirted her. He walked behind her and tried to have a conversation with her; however, she was silent without any responses to him. Because being a guy who never wants to give up with this easily, he still continued walking behind her. They both walked for a fairly far distance until the girl arrived at her destination. There, John could see many people. Nonetheless, they are all gays. What's more, before leaving, that girl eventually said "good bye" to him and then walked towards those people. At that time John was so shocked because of her reality. Actually she was not a girl, but she was a gay! After all John was so frustrated, felt so bad with this and then left there with speechless. John told himself that he learnt a new lesson for judging people at the first sight.