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Jul 19, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS - "having heaven gift is offering a better a chance" [3]
It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that ant child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Since having created, mankinds have still been evolving in various ways; as a result, we can see some who have a talented skill are born. Some people believe that genius may be given as a birth naturally whereas others insist that youngsters can obtain a good ability by training. In my point of view, it can be seen that children can derive high capacity from education.
It is quite obvious that certain people born with their faculty are most likely to success in their fields. Teaching talented children helps their capability become more reinforced if children have a great talented ability, for instance, Mozart, who was maestro of classical music, was able to play piano when he was 3years old, his father was also a famous musician at that time and he was jealous to teach music to his son. By doing so, Mozart became one of the most influential a musician through centuries in the world.
On the other hand, some feel that the youth can reach their high objective without a one's natural gift by providing them with superior education, in this respect, people are these day able to have a look at many achievements by our heroes on earth. For example, even though Albert Einstein, who was often regarded as the father of modern physics, had difficulties with early speech and solving mathematics problems when he was an early child, he was awarded the Nobel Prize in physics and left behind remarkable achievements
Given both side of prospects, it is quite clear that having heaven gift is offering a better a chance to our sons and daughters in order to be successful their areas. However, I believe that it is far more important that they can be improved their own growth as much as we teach them with better educational environment.
thank you for reading my essay so far. I already knew what My English is really poor, so I need your help.
It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that ant child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Since having created, mankinds have still been evolving in various ways; as a result, we can see some who have a talented skill are born. Some people believe that genius may be given as a birth naturally whereas others insist that youngsters can obtain a good ability by training. In my point of view, it can be seen that children can derive high capacity from education.
It is quite obvious that certain people born with their faculty are most likely to success in their fields. Teaching talented children helps their capability become more reinforced if children have a great talented ability, for instance, Mozart, who was maestro of classical music, was able to play piano when he was 3years old, his father was also a famous musician at that time and he was jealous to teach music to his son. By doing so, Mozart became one of the most influential a musician through centuries in the world.
On the other hand, some feel that the youth can reach their high objective without a one's natural gift by providing them with superior education, in this respect, people are these day able to have a look at many achievements by our heroes on earth. For example, even though Albert Einstein, who was often regarded as the father of modern physics, had difficulties with early speech and solving mathematics problems when he was an early child, he was awarded the Nobel Prize in physics and left behind remarkable achievements
Given both side of prospects, it is quite clear that having heaven gift is offering a better a chance to our sons and daughters in order to be successful their areas. However, I believe that it is far more important that they can be improved their own growth as much as we teach them with better educational environment.
thank you for reading my essay so far. I already knew what My English is really poor, so I need your help.