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Oct 22, 2008
Essays / Fall of Rome - history essay [2]
For a history essay, I'm arguing that internal conflicts led to the fall of Western Rome. My thesis:
By failing to assert its strong leadership that sustained an empire for so long, Western Rome's collapse was the result of poor social and economic decisions by its Emperors.
I'm thinking it may be too vague, but ultimately what i want to get across is that Rome died from the inside out. My arguments so far are Slavery, Over inflation, Poor electoral system, Technological stagnation and Christianity.
Am I on the right track or should I revise my thesis somehow?
For a history essay, I'm arguing that internal conflicts led to the fall of Western Rome. My thesis:
By failing to assert its strong leadership that sustained an empire for so long, Western Rome's collapse was the result of poor social and economic decisions by its Emperors.
I'm thinking it may be too vague, but ultimately what i want to get across is that Rome died from the inside out. My arguments so far are Slavery, Over inflation, Poor electoral system, Technological stagnation and Christianity.
Am I on the right track or should I revise my thesis somehow?