Writing Feedback / I prefer to work for a lager company - more chance for promotion [4]

Greetings!

Your writing is okay but, I can tell you, You did'nt read over what you wrote. My suggestions would be to read over your writing and if it is'nt clear to you, Then you will no it's not clear to anyone else.

It was'nt very clear to me.

Keep with it you will get it!

Thanks,

Bonita