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I prefer to work for a lager company - more chance for promotion

shipima 1 / 1  
Aug 14, 2011   #1
Some people prefer to work for a lager company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer.

The topic of whether would you prefer to work for a large company or a small company is one that has concerned many people. It is held by some people that small company is a good place to work, because they believe that they can have a good a good opportunity to get high position. Meanwhile, there is an equally good argument that they prefer to work for a larger company. From my opinion of view, a large company is a good choose for me to work for.

When it comes to sense of achievement and job satisfaction a small company simply cannot compete with a large company. Large company always has lots of workers and very big deal to cope with. This give people more chance to get high position and have more people to work for him, when they complete one big meal they can get more money that would encourage workers work hard and more satisfaction.

Another way in which large companies are better than small ones is that large companies offer their workers wither more chance for promotion. Large company has lots of position and has more science system to choose more capacity person. What you did is just work hard, following with your lead and make contribute to your company; you will be having more chance to arise your position. But in small company, it is hard for you to get a good position.

Unlike many small companies, nearly all large company provides generous benefit packages to their employees. Your society benefit will contact with you company, a large company would have a special department work for people's society benefit packages. You can't see what this can do until you get sick or need buy a house. While in a small company you would not have this benefit packages, because small company can't support the department and could not provide this.

In summary, I prefer to work for a large company.

bonita l - / 1  
Aug 14, 2011   #2

Your writing is okay but, I can tell you, You did'nt read over what you wrote. My suggestions would be to read over your writing and if it is'nt clear to you, Then you will no it's not clear to anyone else.

It was'nt very clear to me.

Keep with it you will get it!


lt12528 4 / 8  
Aug 15, 2011   #3
Another suggestion: address the other side of the issue. Tell why some people might think that it is better to work for a small company, and explain why you disagree with those people or why the benefits of working for a large company outweigh the benefits of working for a small company.
Icecreamquest 6 / 15  
Aug 25, 2011   #4
Your writing is great! But if some words can be replaced by others , I mean diversity, such as "good" replaced by "amazing","beneficial" or "significant" etc.,it would give reader much more surprise.

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