Posts by iceage1235813

iceage1235813

Aug 24, 2011

Writing Feedback / It is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child. [7]

Oh, I've never think about it that way. I'll rewrite it wright away. Thank you!

iceage1235813

Aug 24, 2011

Writing Feedback / It is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child. [7]

Thank you. It will be great if you can give me more advices in my later essays.

iceage1235813

Aug 24, 2011

Writing Feedback / It is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child. [7]

Oh, thank you so much. Actually the maximum words required is just 100. But later I'll have to write a longer one later so your opinion is really helpful for my next essay. Thank you.

iceage1235813

Aug 24, 2011

Writing Feedback / It is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child. [7]

In my opinion, it is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child. If you are an only child, you will easily feel lonely. You have to do everything on your own and your parents sometime do not understand you as your brothers or sisters do. When you grow up with brothers and sisters, you can learn good values from them. You will learn how to show your consideration, how to cooperation and share things with others. All these values will help you a lot in the real life.

I'm really bad in writing so I hope you'd help me to prove it.