Undergraduate / "Cosiness" - Why Yale [8]

Hi

Im an international student applying for Yale this year. I dont have much experience at these "short answers" so I would like to have a second opinion.

This is my "Why Yale" short essay

What in particular about Yale has influenced your decision to apply? Please limit your response to the space provided.

Cosiness. The state of warm confort between the students, the professors and the roommates is the most important factor for me. I feel that being an international student at Yale I will not be thousands of kilometers far from home, but I will actually find a second home. The fame of Yale is not only for being one of the best universities in the world, but also for providing the best learning and housing environment for its students and employees.

Is that too regular? Should I be "wilder" or something? Please help me guys...

Thanks