Posts by pulkit9999

pulkit9999

Nov 25, 2011

Undergraduate / My big sister has made an impact on your life [3]

Sometimes we come across a person who changes the outlook of ~~your~~ our life.It might be a person whom we hate the most too.For instance during my fifteen years as a young boy i used to hate my sister as she always told me to something or another, but now i have realized it was for my benefit...

i have made some changes i might be wrong , but i hope like it

Over that It is an interesting topic and there is a lot you can write about it. You should write about-
>What did the person tell you to do.
>How did things changed.
>When did u realize that whatever your sister told you was for your good.
>The ways you both had arguments
etc :)

pulkit9999

Sep 5, 2011

Writing Feedback / Is television a dangerous influence on teenagers behavior? (Argumentative Essay) [2]

Hello,

I have written a little bit about "Is television a dangerous influence on teenagers behavior?" but i wanted to know more. Anyways how is it and how can i improve it.

Thanks

Television is one of the greatest inventions ever. Over the past few decades it has evolved a lot from black and white to colored , from 2d to 3d. Earlier there used a limited content on the television whereas now there is a lot. At present television broadcast a lot of stuff which is not recommended for teenager to watch but we can not stop it. Like we have heard a lot of times that "We Do What We See" we can say if one watches something bad or unadvised on the television , one would do the same! So i strongly believe that its not the television but its the content on it which influences the teenagers behavior....