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Posts by karremflores
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karremflores   
Sep 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Is money the most important aspect of a job? I THINK SO! [3]

I totally agree in this nice question because frankly saying people now in our generation is looking for money even if they love there passion or they love there work,but still they need the right price of there talent,that's why agree that the important aspect of a job is money..Others said that they love there job even if they did not receive the right price of there beloved jobs.But base of my own experience and all the people I've been encounter that they cannot show the best of there work without paying the right price.I have most co-workers in our company that they seek a better company to pay the right price of there talent to perform there true passion about there job...One of our chef cook told me how he love his work,but he also said that if the company will not pay the right price that he demand to them,he will not express,or perform all best he got about cooking.

Not all of us have the same principles about our job,but we also have to understand most employee's here in our beloved country,cause i think they're right too.first of all if they don't do that,then other company will do the same to them use there talent to [boom]or recognize there company without paying the right price of there employee's.Some of them improving there skills in there beloved job,in every years to come making there selves valuable in there company,that's why most of them claim there own rights.

Some of us do there job to show there talent or to show there passion even without paying the right price,but we can't blame them they just follow what there heart desires.But we all live for money then work for money,frankly saying give all the best you have in the name money...THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS
karremflores   
Sep 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children . agree or disagree [2]

For this case i agree in firm discipline,but it depends in how you handled it,and how the way you discipline the children.Kids are obviously have different kind of attitude and it's important to know them better to avoid them to be force,or make violence and be depart upon you.

Firm discipline is very important,in that way you helping the kids to step in right way,to be a better person in the becoming future.But as i said it depends in how you handle it.Most of the parent's discipline there children in not a good way,and the result is they force their children to make violence with other.The positive result in firm discipline is you can control your children,but in the good way,In the way that children will afraid of you not because you punish them but you just end of there evil doings.They learn much respect than other,and afraid in doing bad and violent things.In that way you can say in your self that your children will grow-up as a better person.

And the best necessary part in teaching children is learn to balance your disciplinary action punish them if needed,but control all your actions,make the children understand you because of their mistakes.Make them feel why you do the things that they assume your wrong..

For all the parent's and to the becoming parent's in future,do the things what's good in your heart for your children and up coming children..

Hoping for your kind and consideration... THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS...
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