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Sep 18, 2011
Undergraduate / ' Assimilating Depression' ;mom's hospitalization- Common App Personal statement [2]
I would rewrite the first sentence as:
A few years ago, I overheard my father pressing the psychiatrist about my mother's hospitalization for depression, and I convinced myself that I, a naive child of twelve, would never "be crazy."
I would rewrite the first sentence as:
A few years ago, I overheard my father pressing the psychiatrist about my mother's hospitalization for depression, and I convinced myself that I, a naive child of twelve, would never "be crazy."