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writing an exciting monologue

i have to do a monologue in drama and ive got a good start but its got a rubbish ending so i need help it starts with my character being on top of the world famous fashion designer everything going perfect and husband that gave her a lot of money to start of the business and even though my character had a miscarriage he stuck by her and told her he'll stay by her side support her and to concentrate on what was going well the business but then valentines day she comes home an hour early from work to find him snogging her best friend and he stands up smiles at her while her friends stares at the floor ashamed and he says he wants all the money he paid her to get her business started plus interest i go to leave and he grabs my arm hard to point were I'm gasping in pain and then he Tell's me i need to be out the house within the week and he's sorry he never loved me he just wanted the money and her best friend was a lot better and also starting a new business then in court i have to pay him the money but not interest and i get the car he gets the house but i don't know where to take it from there help!