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Family Tree Essay- Introduction [4]
Hello, this is the first time posting on this forum. I would like some feedback on this introduction paragraph i am writing for my American studies class. The assignment is to research and write an essay about your own family tree. Thanks
Families are unique, they can be prodigious or meager. Some families have characteristics that make them irregular, while some that make them typical. Many families can be traced back to their inception. The place that it all began. This method of discovering is called genealogy. Genealogy is a line of work where one discovers the predecessors of his or her family tree. This process can be very stressful and strenuous at times, involving many dead ends, and many disappointments. However, in the end after it all plays out, it is well worth it.
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