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Oct 31, 2011
Graduate / 'Help to those suffering from speech and language disorders' - Speech Pathology [3]

I am currently working on my statement of purpose as well! I think it sounds good, and while I cannot comment on grammar (since I am extremly poor in it). I can give some advice

1) I would mention more of the school that your interested in, what professors interest you, what research? I would take each essay and add a part that describes the school and why you are interest to go there. Schools want you to include this information, because they dont want you to send out the identical essays to other schools. I would look into dropping some professor names and ones you look forward to learning from.

I love how personal and heartfelt your letter is, I feel that if I was on the admittance committee I would without hesitation let you in. One school that I am looking into gave an outline of the statement and this might help you out:

A letter of intent:
The letter of intent should be 1-2 pages, double-spaced with 1 inch margins.
Explain why you want to pursue a career in Speech-Language Pathology and why you want to attend USF to obtain your graduate degree.
Show that you are familiar with our program (professors and research areas in which you are interested, unique features of the department that appeal to you, etc.)

Tell us why you believe that you'll be successful in graduate school.
Point out your strengths and achievements (e.g., volunteering, academic, research, or other experiences) and special skills (e.g., bilingualism, experience with children/elderly, unusual computer skills).

Address weaknesses or possible poor grades on your transcripts.

Good luck!
missind33   
Oct 31, 2011
Graduate / 'speech therapy I received as a child' Letter of Intent: Speech Language Pathology MS [2]

I blanked out any mention of teachers, and the school for privacy. The school I want to attend stated this on their admission website, this will give you an idea on what they were looking for.

A letter of intent:

I can vividly remember the speech therapy I received as a child. I remember my difficulty in pronouncing sounds like s, th, and z. the therapy sessions involving games focused on pronouncing difficult the sounds, oral reading activities, as well as the prizes I had received in the end. Speech therapy is a memory of mine that I remember most fondly, and this memory is the reason why I want to be a speech-language pathologist. My own experience with speech therapy as a child showed me the field has the ability to radically change lives. The opportunity to return the favor to children of future generations is my goal.

I am attracted to ___ graduate program in Speech-Language Pathology due to the large variety of research interests in language and literacy offered at the school. Based on ____ state-of-the art facilities, the strength of the speech language program and the research possibilities, I can expect to receive the tools to achieve my goal of becoming an effective clinician in a school system. Some of the current faculty I look forward to learning from would include Dr. ___ and Dr.____, due to the interest I have in their areas of study, child language and literacy. Throughout my undergraduate studies I have heard positive reviews about the program. I always knew I wanted to attend ___ for graduate school.

I believe I will be successful in the graduate program due to my performance in my undergraduate studies. In the past, I observed a speech language pathologist who worked in a rehabilitation facility. I felt it was necessary to first gain knowledge of the field by observation and then gain hands-on-experience. I also volunteered with preschool children. I can remember on my first day, I was more scared of the preschoolers than they were of me! The time spent at these places was a learning experience that I can carry throughout my career. I am currently in the Honors in the Major program at ___, developing my own research project with assistance of Dr.___ and Dr.___, working on a Systematic Review and Meta Analysis on how language disorders is defined and diagnosed. In the past I have assisted PHD students in both the Communication Science and Disorder and Exceptional Education department and , including Dr.___. This experience along with my undergraduate courses in Language Science and Language Development has taught me why research is essential to the field, and piqued my interest in child language. Having these credentials and completing my undergraduate studies a year early demonstrate that I am a hardworking student who will be successful in your program.

___'s graduate degree program in Speech-Language Pathology is an amazing academic program which I expect will present exciting opportunities and will allow me to reach my academic and career goals. I am a confident student. I will bring my strengths and enthusiasm to ___ and the ___ community. I can represent ___ with pride. I appreciate the considerations on my application, and I look forward to the challenges which lay ahead.
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