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Nov 3, 2011
Poetry / Imagination; Never ending - help on my cinquain poem [4]

Poem On a CINQUAIN

Hi, I need really good ideas for all the different types of poems here. If I need new or better words, please feel free to change anything up!

On a CINQUAIN,
1st line: one word noun
2nd line: two words adjectives describing that noun
3rd line: three words verbs to show action regarding the noun
4th line: four words that express feeling about the noun like a phrase
5th line: one word that is a synonym for the noun above

here is what i have so far:

Winter
Cold, chilly
Freezing, snowing, blowing << might need to change that word
Temperatures are below 60 degrees << does that make sense or is that fine?
Season

Cat
Furry, cute
shedding, meowing, running << whats another word i could use?
They are so adorable << i really need to change that, i sound like a little kid. another meaningful phrase?
Kitten

Spring
fresh, pretty << i need another adjective describing spring, this is just too simple
blooming, raining, warming
nature comes to life
season

PLEASE HELP ME SOON!! THANKS
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