Undergraduate / 'I want designing' - USC Freshman: Engineering [4]

for the second prompt you didn't reallly answer the question of why you would embrace/reject that stereotype. I'm thiking you will be leaning more towards the reject? if so talk about the most important aspects of engineering and things like creativity and other qualities

Undergraduate / UC Essay My 1966 Mustang [6]

"Also every time I get behind the wheel of my car I feel like I am driving in a Fast and Furious movie." i also think you should delete that. Um how many words is this?

"He said he my brother got hit by a car we wanted to see it. He told my brother "Don't stop, keep going." Don't stop, keep going is exactly how I had to treat driving." I feel like a lot of your sentences are repetitive... try using different words? and what do you mean by "he my brother got hit by a car?"