kpj1994
Nov 25, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Voluntering at a hospital, the fine arts' - Rutgers Essay [3]
Thank you so much for the help! :D
Thank you so much for the help! :D
kpj1994
Nov 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Voluntering at a hospital, the fine arts' - Rutgers Essay [3]
Feel free to butcher. I know its not that great
Required Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences. Only personal essays submitted via our website will be considered.
High school. An establishment in which first impressions and appearances are key to survival. An establishment in which the rumor cycle could destroy your reputation instantaneously. An establishment so daunting to teenagers, they would lost sight of who they are just to fit into the popular crowd. Due to the large amount of cultural references made on television, movie screens, and novels, these were the first ideas that came to mind when I thought of it. I hadn't even taken the first steps into that monstrous institution and I already felt that I would dread the next four years of my life. I would make no friends, gain more weight than I already had, and do terribly with my grades. Surprisingly, the polar opposite of all of these suppositions occurred by the end of junior year. I was content with my grades, I lost a tremendous amount of weight, and most importantly, I experienced the diversity that existed within my school by interacting with a wide variety of people. These interactions were vital for my development from an awkward and reserved teenager to the more outgoing and friendly person I am today. Even though I thank high school for bringing about great changes within me, attending the right university can enrich these developments. This is why Rutgers University is right for me. I can help contribute to its diversity with my volunteering experience, appeal towards the finer arts, and mixed cultural background as well as benefit from its richly multifaceted environment.
My volunteering experience can be a great asset to the variety that exists within Rutgers University. Throughout my high school career, I have been volunteering at the Shore Memorial Hospital in Somers Point for the Medical Explorers club, where various adults with different occupational careers come and explain their jobs and their prospective outlook in the future. Also, members assisted with the mechanics of the hospital's facilities. This experience had intrigued me greatly and unraveled my desire to help others who need it, whether medically, emotionally, or financially. This desire could be satiated by the various community service projects that exist in all Rutgers's branches. (I don't know what else to put)
Although school work was my main priority throughout my education, the fine arts have always been a personal passion of mine. I have played percussive instruments from ever since fifth grade, sang in chorus and for other events since the seventh grade, and participated in theatrical productions on multiple occasions. I attempt to take all performing arts extracurricular activities because it has always alleviated my stress and helped me focus throughout the school years. The people that I have met in this particular social class also played a huge role in my character development because of their kind demeanor and sociability. I hope to join just as many programs that are available within the Rutgers community in order to broaden my horizons in this particular field.
Lastly, my mix of Indian and American cultures can contribute to Rutgers's diversity. Because I was born in the United States and my parents were born in India and moved to the United States, I could never be completely typified as either Indian or American. I would always be a culmination of both cultures. As an "Indian American", I have always been taught to respect my elders and ask for their blessings, as per Indian tradition, yet assert my opinion and let my voice be heard, which comes from American culture. Culture clashes do occur sporadically, but are quickly settled as to assure that I stand my ground on certain ideas. This combination has proven to be advantageous in many situations and can contribute greatly to Rutgers's Indian subpopulation.
As I reach the end of my high school career, I look back at all I have done with a smile. Sure, there are moments where I wish I could have done things differently, but those moments are the ones that brought about the greatest changes within me.
PLEASE HELP.
Feel free to butcher. I know its not that great
Required Essay: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences. Only personal essays submitted via our website will be considered.
High school. An establishment in which first impressions and appearances are key to survival. An establishment in which the rumor cycle could destroy your reputation instantaneously. An establishment so daunting to teenagers, they would lost sight of who they are just to fit into the popular crowd. Due to the large amount of cultural references made on television, movie screens, and novels, these were the first ideas that came to mind when I thought of it. I hadn't even taken the first steps into that monstrous institution and I already felt that I would dread the next four years of my life. I would make no friends, gain more weight than I already had, and do terribly with my grades. Surprisingly, the polar opposite of all of these suppositions occurred by the end of junior year. I was content with my grades, I lost a tremendous amount of weight, and most importantly, I experienced the diversity that existed within my school by interacting with a wide variety of people. These interactions were vital for my development from an awkward and reserved teenager to the more outgoing and friendly person I am today. Even though I thank high school for bringing about great changes within me, attending the right university can enrich these developments. This is why Rutgers University is right for me. I can help contribute to its diversity with my volunteering experience, appeal towards the finer arts, and mixed cultural background as well as benefit from its richly multifaceted environment.
My volunteering experience can be a great asset to the variety that exists within Rutgers University. Throughout my high school career, I have been volunteering at the Shore Memorial Hospital in Somers Point for the Medical Explorers club, where various adults with different occupational careers come and explain their jobs and their prospective outlook in the future. Also, members assisted with the mechanics of the hospital's facilities. This experience had intrigued me greatly and unraveled my desire to help others who need it, whether medically, emotionally, or financially. This desire could be satiated by the various community service projects that exist in all Rutgers's branches. (I don't know what else to put)
Although school work was my main priority throughout my education, the fine arts have always been a personal passion of mine. I have played percussive instruments from ever since fifth grade, sang in chorus and for other events since the seventh grade, and participated in theatrical productions on multiple occasions. I attempt to take all performing arts extracurricular activities because it has always alleviated my stress and helped me focus throughout the school years. The people that I have met in this particular social class also played a huge role in my character development because of their kind demeanor and sociability. I hope to join just as many programs that are available within the Rutgers community in order to broaden my horizons in this particular field.
Lastly, my mix of Indian and American cultures can contribute to Rutgers's diversity. Because I was born in the United States and my parents were born in India and moved to the United States, I could never be completely typified as either Indian or American. I would always be a culmination of both cultures. As an "Indian American", I have always been taught to respect my elders and ask for their blessings, as per Indian tradition, yet assert my opinion and let my voice be heard, which comes from American culture. Culture clashes do occur sporadically, but are quickly settled as to assure that I stand my ground on certain ideas. This combination has proven to be advantageous in many situations and can contribute greatly to Rutgers's Indian subpopulation.
As I reach the end of my high school career, I look back at all I have done with a smile. Sure, there are moments where I wish I could have done things differently, but those moments are the ones that brought about the greatest changes within me.
PLEASE HELP.