Posts by baron

baron_2007

Nov 25, 2011

Writing Feedback / SAT Essay About Whether Small Decision Often Have Major Consequence [2]

It's good and interesting. However, in the third sentence of the second paragraph, "However, them can hardly elucidate reasonably that why the Britains intended to apply a violent way ", it's hard to understand what you're saying. And in the second to last sentence of the second paragraph, at the very end, you wrote "could emerge a war. " That doesn't make sense. You could put "could bring about a war" and that would sound good or change the wording but it doesn't sound right the way it is. Overall, you did a good job.

baron_2007

Nov 25, 2011

Undergraduate / 'without the companionship of my parents' - How my family background impacted goals [4]

I think you did a great job. There are no writing or spelling errors that I found and your paper is interesting. You followed the directions and explained how your childhood, growing up with relatives that didn't have a lot of money and didn't seem to want you, affected your goals. You included all the requirements. I think you should get an A on this.

baron_2007

Nov 25, 2011

Essays / Help understanding how to write a reflection essay on a paper I did. [2]

In my class, I had to write a small essay every week for 5 weeks that is supposed to be combined to make one large paper on technology in the classroom. I have to write a reflection essay on that paper. Here is what the benchmark instructions say:

Reflection Essay
1) After synthesizing the components into a final plan, write a 750-1,000 word reflection essay that summarizes how your comprehensive classroom technology plan can increase productivity and efficiency for both students and teachers.

I have never done a reflection essay and I am completely confused one how to do this. I asked my professor to explain what I am supposed to do and all he told me was that it is a reflection of how I put the technology plan together and to discuss what I did to come up with the technology plan I finished. I'm so lost. I just don't understand and I am frustrated. Could someone please give me some ideas on how to do this reflection essay?