Posts by behrouz

behrouz

Dec 2, 2011

Essays / (how technology will impact their businesses) writing a dynamic introduction [4]

Firstly, new technology paves the way for disappearing of small business; let me to help you with an example: fishing is the way of life and income in some places in the world, but with the advancement of fishing technology with huge ships, in this aspect small ship cannot compete and at result they are disappearing.

Secondly, in other aspect new technology help to small business, for example Microsoft by creating computers and then internet, have created many businesses in societies.

I hope it be useful.
and it is necessary to inform you, English is not my first language, it is useful if you edit my statements and aware me for it mistakes,

Thank you
B.Mohammadi

behrouz

Dec 1, 2011

Essays / "why do student smoke" - how to start this argumentative essay? [5]

in my opinion there are some major reasons for this problem:
1- modernity of socities
in this aspect both of parents are working, then they havent enough time to spend with their children, then children consume most of their free times with their friends. and bad friends cause to this problem.

2- nature of youth.
because young people attract to new things to test those. for example: smoking!
i hope it be useful.

behrouz

Dec 1, 2011

Essays / (how technology will impact their businesses) writing a dynamic introduction [4]

in my opinion there are two fileds to discuss about this topic:
1- by promoting of technology, step by step small businesses become limited.
2- technology help to small businesses by creating new job positions. because every technology create new requirements.
i hope it be useful for you.

behrouz

Dec 1, 2011

Letters / Employee recommendation letter (chemical engineering and biotechnology) [3]

dear friend
very thank you for your attention and time.
i change one section of my letter to promote it, please see it. thank you

As his employer for two years, I can confirm by his joining to our company R&D team, obviously, have been made distinctive leap in mobility and producing.

behrouz

Dec 1, 2011

Letters / Employee recommendation letter (chemical engineering and biotechnology) [3]

dear
i would like to prepare a recommendation for one of my staff, i will appreciate if you can help me to edit this letter.
best regards

Date 27 November 2011

To Whom It May Concern:

It is my pleasure and honor to recommend ... who is applying for PhD studies at the University of ... . I have known ... since the April of 2009 when he started his working as R&D researcher in ... company.

As his employer for two years I confirm that by his joining to R&D group of .... company, obviously, have been created distinctive leap in mobility and producing of Tabriz petrochemical company. I have observed his responsible, personal discipline, and high academic & research abilities. His good researches in our company resulted in several successful projects, including: phase change materials (PCMs) microencapsulation by various technics and polymeric shells, synthesis of lost foam which is the most commonly used foam in casting industry by suspension polymerization, and promotion of engineering polymers synthesis processes such as grafted-ABS (acrylonitrile-butadiene-styrene). He also, performed well as a team leader when required, and worked effectively as a team member under the direction of other team leaders. One of the excellent characteristics of He was that he volunteered to help others in the researches. He demonstrated the ability to work independently with great creativity and enthusiasm.

He has been one of the best employees I have had over years. You would certainly benefit from his joining to your institute. It is clear to me that he is an exceptional candidate, one that would contribute greatly to any program. Therefore, I would like to strongly support his application for PhD study in department of chemical engineering and biotechnology of University of .... .

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
Sincerely,