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babygirl36   
Dec 1, 2011
Letters / Employee recommendation letter (chemical engineering and biotechnology) [3]

I would take out "the" when you mention how long you have known the employee...Instead of saying I have known...since "the" April 2009, you should say "I have known...since April 2009, when he...

You should say "As his employer for two years, I can confirm his joining to R&D Group of...company. He has made a creative, distinctive leap in mobility...

His researches, instead of his good researches.

He also performs well as a team leader when required, and also works effectively as a team member
babygirl36   
Dec 1, 2011
Essays / (how technology will impact their businesses) writing a dynamic introduction [4]

I am using the cause & effect pattern for my paper titled Technology's Impact on Small Businesses. I am having a writer's block, and some help will be useful. My thesis statement is "Many small businesses are skeptical about how technology will impact their businesses on a daily basis"

Any help?! Please??!! Thank you!!
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